Is there someone that could check me this translation in English??I'm italian girl!! thanks?

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Is there someone that could check me this translation in English??I'm italian girl!! thanks?

Honey, this is way too long! These questions should be short and specific.

In general, I'd suggest shortening your sentences; use periods instead of commas to break a long sentence into several short ones.

Is there someone that could check me this translation in English??I'm italian girl!! thanks?

I can get what you are saying but for the most part the grammar is not correct and some of the word choices are also incorrect, though I can understand what you mean. There are also spelling problems. Unfornuately I do not have time to rewrite it so that it is correct but you should speak with an English tutor about corrections. I think some of the problems are colloquial use of words which doesn't seem to translate well and some of the problems are that we structure our sentences differently. I don't know what level of English you are expected to have for this assignment but for someone who speaks English as a second langauge I think it is a good effort. However you should consult with someone who is fluent to learn the more intricate nuances. If you are using Microsoft Word as a word processor, go to tools and select the "language" option, and change the language to "English, US". This will change the word processor auto-correct to detect errors based on improper english grammar and spelling mistakes. It is not perfect but it will help you correct your paper so that it will read in English, as spoken in the U.S.



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