Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?
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"euphoric skyline that draped over the jubilant grads"
it sounds good but i would personally use more simple language
if i made a magazine, i would put this in it
and if the story was in a magazine, i would buy it
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?I gave up after the third paragraph. Your over-use of fancy adjectives and other "fine writing" is typical of many new authors, and can be cured. But it puts most readers right OFF! Report It
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?There is potential here. If you are truly passionate about writing, willing to be rejected many times before being accepted, and have perseverance then study writing and work on your story. Best Wishes! Report It
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?ya next time u want someone to answer something don't do this it is not worth it.
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?first of all it a long story and it has no meaning go back and try again and this time make it short.
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?You must have pleasure in expressing your short-living incidents which will be a permanent source of happyness and enjoyment..go on writing - preserve the memento of your personal pleasure .
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?Before you write story, be guided from :Author Assist.com; also Writer's Digest, Timothy Hallinan com. Know about plot, setting, 3 structure of a story to make it easy. by just looking your masterpiece, you have almost same length of paragraph that even essay needs pattern. good luck.
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