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This one of my first attempt at lyrics writting, so please don't be too harsh when you rate.
Constructive criticism would be helpful as well.
My friends find it corny, you'll probably find it dull, but your comments can help me fix it and write more! Thank you and enjoy:
WHAT WE PULLED
You were fallen, I pulled you back up
You pulled me in with your smile of luck
You pushed me away from your heart
Warned me you were pulling my leg
Tonight will be the last of its kind
I held on while you pulled your shirt off,
I hung on, while you pulled at my hair,
To a dream you had pushed out of my mind
Pulling up my pants did I realize?
Tonight will be the last of its kind
I had let you pull at my heartstrings
Pull my phantom soul to pieces
Once more you were pushing me astray
Did you expect me to pull through?
Tonight will be the last of its kind
You pulled the plug of my heart, of my life
As if you had pulled off a big deal
Could I have pushed your memory away
Please rate my song lyrics?Ignore your stupid friends, I'm not a critic but i can tell you it was excellent, i think it could be turned into a GREAT rock song.
Don't stop writing songs, keep 'em comin' bro!!
Please rate my song lyrics?OMg,that's pretty cool! I give a 7(1 out of10).
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